I wrote this in facebook but I will write it here too just in case somebody missed it.this has nothing to do with naruto.its a personal favor.
can you check this site and give me your opinion and feedback? any suggestion or criticize is welcomed ;)
http://sh-datacenter.com/homepage/
Nov 2, 2009
10:24 PM
there should be the same menu in the home page as in the about HS (i mean the submenu thing)
Nov 3, 2009
7:12 AM
and i guess it's a work in progress because there are links that don't work and missing text
Nov 3, 2009
7:13 AM
our suggestions about wat !!
if ur asking if the site is cool or not then i think it's cool but y this Hani have his name too many times down there in a clumsy way!
Nov 3, 2009
7:18 AM
note i just saw the main page not the other pages
Nov 3, 2009
7:19 AM
btw Hakimy r u gonna watch the match between Karameh and Kuwait !!!
Karameh wil winnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn hopefully :D
Nov 3, 2009
7:26 AM
@shin: yeah I know about this.oh and we r still working on it.so do u have anything else? ;)
@ahmad: well he is my boss.I will change it into HS,this text was old before i join the company.and I don't want you to say "cool",i want you to give a general opinion and if there is something that u dont like then say it.as for that match,well tonight its real madrid vs milan and u r asking about karameh vs kuwait? :P
Nov 3, 2009
8:18 AM
Since i almost failed my Biz Comm class, take my opinion with a grain of salt but you have lots of English mistakes which looks highly unprofessional (Philsphy?). Writing vertically is uncomfortable and unpleasant to read.
You're often not to the point... who cares about the company's mission statement; talk about what the client wants to know i.e. how much it will cost, how fast, where, etc.
What the hell is a capability? "Our experts and abilities/strengths.. or just expertise/experts"
contact links to outlook... what if someone wants a phone number, address or email?
Anyway. correct the English mistakes and then the clumsy format.
=== Original Message ===
I wrote this in facebook but I will write it here too just in case somebody missed it.this has nothing to do with naruto.its a personal favor.
can you check this site and give me your opinion and feedback? any suggestion or criticize is welcomed ;)
http://sh-datacenter.com/homepage/
Nov 4, 2009
9:57 AM
you even wrote "Consoltants" on your main header... you'll have trouble getting clients with such a crappy site. no offense
Nov 4, 2009
10:00 AM
don't worry.I'm aware of the english mistakes.this site was done before I join the firm.and they want me to correct those mistakes.but thanks for the main page thing cus i was focusing on the sub pages ;)
Nov 4, 2009
1:47 PM